Found some more.
This should be "forget" not "forgetting"
This should have the word "looks" as the second word as that's missing. Also the second sentence sounds off to me. Something more like "She has a shocked expression and bites her lower lip" or "With a shocked expression, she bites her lip" or "Shocked, she bites her lower lip" would sound better.
Missing question mark here
Missing question mark here too.
I also had this weird problem where in Nanaru's second h-scene it wouldn't let me use the screenshot button on screen or use F12 to take a screenshot but around midway through the first CG of the scene it started working again just fine. Same thing happened when I reloaded. I got it from JAST so it's not a patching issue. Not a big deal since it only effected the built in screenshot thing but it was weird and I thought worth mentioning. I'd post a screenshot but the image is a bit lewd and I'm not sure if that's allowed here. The line where it starts working again is:
Nanaru: "Mmh! Fwah, ah, aaaahh...!"